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Course: ENGLISH - YEAR 4
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Persuasive letter: The Red Poppy

Lesson 1: Exploring the Themes and Purpose of The Red Poppy

Objective: Students will explore the themes of The Red Poppy and understand how to express opinions about a text’s significance.

Materials:

  • The Red Poppy by David Hill (read aloud)
  • Whiteboard/Smartboard
  • Worksheet: Theme and Key Words (with sections for important themes and key vocabulary)

Introduction

1.    Begin by reading The Red Poppy aloud to the class. Discuss the themes of bravery, friendship, and war as they come up in the story.

2.    Write key themes and vocabulary words on the board (e.g., “war,” “peace,” “bravery,” “compassion”).

3.    Explain that students will be writing a persuasive letter, asking the school librarian to add The Red Poppy to the library. Before they can do that, they need to understand why the book is important and what makes it worth recommending.

Activity 1

  • Hand out the “Theme and Key Words” worksheet.
  • As a class, identify the major themes and key words that highlight why this book is significant. Encourage students to write these down as they will use them in their persuasive letters.

Activity 2

  • In pairs, students will discuss their favorite part of The Red Poppy and why it stood out to them.
  • Ask them to think about why other students should read this book and what message the book sends about war and peace.

Conclusion (5 minutes):

  • Recap the themes discussed and explain that students will use these ideas to persuade the librarian to add the book to the library.

 

Lesson 2: Writing a Persuasive Letter to the Librarian

Objective: Students will plan and write the first draft of a persuasive letter, using key themes and vocabulary from The Red Poppy.

Materials:

  • Theme and Key Words worksheet from Lesson 1
  • Whiteboard/Smartboard
  • Worksheet: Persuasive Letter Template (sections for greeting, introduction, reasons, conclusion)
  • Red pencils for editing

Introduction

1.    Review the key elements of a persuasive letter:

o   Greeting: Address the librarian politely.

o   Introduction: State the purpose of the letter (e.g., requesting The Red Poppy for the library).

o   Reasons: Use persuasive language to explain why this book is important for students to read.

o   Conclusion: Politely restate your request and thank the librarian for considering it.

2.    Model a brief introduction on the board:

o   “Dear Ms. Smith, I am writing to ask if we could add The Red Poppy by David Hill to our school library. This book is important because…”

Activity 1

  • Distribute the “Persuasive Letter Template.”
  • Students will plan and write their persuasive letters, focusing on:
    • Using key themes from the book (e.g., “The Red Poppy teaches us about bravery in difficult situations…”).
    • Including reasons that will persuade the librarian (e.g., “This book helps students understand the importance of friendship during tough times.”).
    • Using vocabulary discussed in Lesson 1.

Activity 2

  • Once students have written their first draft, they will exchange letters with a partner to review each other’s work.
  • Encourage them to check for clear reasoning, proper grammar, and spelling.

Conclusion

  • Remind students that in the next lesson, they will edit their work using red pencils to improve their letters.

 

Lesson 3: Editing and Improving the Persuasive Letter

Objective: Students will edit their persuasive letter using feedback and a checklist to ensure clarity and persuasive effectiveness.

Materials:

  • First drafts of letters from Lesson 2
  • Red pencils
  • Editing Checklist (with sections for spelling, punctuation, persuasive language, and structure)

Introduction

1.    Explain that editing is an important step in making sure their letters are clear and convincing.

2.    Review the editing checklist with the class:

o   Are there any spelling or punctuation errors?

o   Did you use persuasive language?

o   Did you organize your letter with a clear introduction, reasons, and conclusion?

Activity 1

  • Students will use the red pencils to edit their letters, focusing on:
    • Improving their language by adding stronger persuasive words (e.g., changing “This book is good” to “This book is inspiring and thought-provoking”).
    • Checking for proper grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure.
    • Ensuring their reasons for recommending the book are clear and persuasive.

Activity 2

  • After editing, students can read their revised letters aloud in small groups, providing constructive feedback to one another.

Conclusion

  • Encourage students to reflect on how they improved their letters through editing. Remind them that clear, well-organized writing makes their ideas more convincing.

 

Lesson 4: Final Presentation and Sharing of Persuasive Letters

Objective: Students will finalize their persuasive letters and share them with the class, practicing clear communication and persuasive speech.

Materials:

  • Final drafts of letters
  • Peer feedback form (optional)

Introduction

1.    Explain that today students will present their letters to the class, practicing clear speaking and persuasive language.

2.    Remind them to speak clearly, use strong persuasive words, and engage the audience.

Activity 1

  • Students will take turns presenting their persuasive letters to the class, using their final drafts.
  • After each presentation, encourage peers to provide positive feedback on how persuasive the letter was and any strengths in the writing or presentation.

Activity 2

  • If time allows, students can vote on which letters they think would most convince the librarian to acquire The Red Poppy for the library.

Conclusion

  • Reflect on the process of writing a persuasive letter. Ask students to share what they found challenging and how they overcame those challenges.

Assessment:

  • Assess students’ ability to write a well-organized persuasive letter using the appropriate structure (introduction, reasons, conclusion).
  • Evaluate the use of persuasive language and key themes from The Red Poppy.
  • Check for proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation in their final drafts.
  • Provide feedback on their presentation skills, including clarity and persuasiveness.

 

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